关于“书”的英语作文，请各位帮忙点评。谢谢。
The value of reading books I don't like （play改成playing） computer games。Why? Because the games are boring（。改成，And改成and，这样的属于一句话还没有说完，这样改比较恰当） it wastes a lot of time。Reading books is more interesting than（ play改成playing，注意结构的对称性） computer games。I like reading novels，scientific books and dictionaries。In my opinion，《Herry Potter》is the best novel。 Books are our friends。They give me lots of knowledge（。And和上句的改法一样，建议变为一句） they doesn't go away from us when we are poor or in trouble。 Let's read more books。We will have a better life。在语法句式上的小改动，希望对你有所帮助！